Saturday, 7 September 2013

ES1102 Scary Oil Summary Exercise

A further increase in oil prices is the most serious threat faced by modern economy. Fear of military crisis between Israel and Iran has lead to a 25% soar in oil prices, which resulted in global recessions. Iran's attacks on Israel embassies has not only lead USA to step up on military measures against Iran, but also to forbid Iran's advancement in nuclear weapon
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  1. Anonymous8 September 2013 at 00:18

    Good summary! I feel the first sentence structure is just a bit odd. You could consider rephrasing it. But that's just my personal opinion :)

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    1. Unknown8 September 2013 at 17:53

      If I change it to: The most serious threat faced by modern economy is a further increase in oil prices. will it be better?

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    2. Unknown13 September 2013 at 01:53

      Yes but 'economy' is a singular countable noun'!

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  2. Unknown8 September 2013 at 23:51

    A further increase in oil prices is the most serious threat faced by (^) modern economy. (^)Fear of military crisis between Israel and Iran has lead to a 25% soar in oil prices, which resulted in global recessions (How many?). Iran's attacks on Israel embassies has not only lead USA to step up on(red) military measures against Iran, but also to forbid Iran's advancement in nuclear weapon(word form)

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